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This is a line worth rereading: "...but how did I forget that shadows still form when snow falls, and the light exhales its waves through foam of crystal cloud?" The light exhaling is just perfect.

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Aw thank you, Charles!

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Love reading your words everytime.

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And I'm honored that you read!

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There are so many beautiful lines and images in this piece ♥️

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Thank you, my friend

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Stunning, Trilety. Just stunning.

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Thank you, Katie!

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I recommend looking up Daniella Sindar on Instagram, I think you might enjoy her memoir-esque video poems.

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Wow. She is intense and definitely leaves a streak of memory. Thank you for the recommendation - I'm following.

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