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Very nicely done Jeanne and Trilety. Thanks for sharing!

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Jul 29, 2023·edited Jul 29, 2023Liked by Trilety Wade

Thanks Victor. See Trilety, he has it right, it is Trilety and Jeanne not just one of us.

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You're right and Victor is right!

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Ugh, beautiful.

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My sentiment exactly

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It's all Jeanne! Thanks for reading and looking

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Thanks, it's all Jeanne!

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It's both of us, a collaboration. hehehe

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Oh but you *are* good.

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Hearts and gratitude to you, babe!

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what a beautiful collaboration by you and Jeanne 🥲

as usual some of your descriptions struck me right in the gut - a child's dress flapping in the wind like a flag around a pole, or the spilled salt of stars. also i can totally see how jeanne's painting inspired your story, and how your story paid homage to jeanne in return - in short, a perfect collaboration. thank you both for this beautiful meditation! 🙏

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Thank you so much. I was truly stuck on this theme until seeing her painting and the rendering of the flip flops and the wistful contemplation of her granddaughter

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Belle. Très belle.

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Aww clever and lovely comment - it's all Jeanne!

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"isolation is a context, but loneliness. . . is a feeling.” "Not as far off as a star and not as close as a kiss." Such beautiful turns of phrase. Lovely painting, lovely story, and a wonderful integration of the two.

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Thank you so much, Terry!

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My pleasure, Trilety. Fantastic writing

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Jul 31, 2023Liked by Trilety Wade

Love love love everything about this entry.

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Thank you, and I knew YOU would be the one to most love and appreciate Jeanne's painting

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Jul 29, 2023Liked by Trilety Wade

Brilliant, as usual.

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Damn, thank you, from me and Jeanne!

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Collaboration on Isolation -perfect! Thanks for collaborating with me!

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Thanks for being the inspiration that gave me some words finally

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Bravo 👏🏼

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Beautiful words, Trilety! Beautiful painting, Jeanne! ❤️

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Thank you!

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